Hi Tom. Don't know if I can add anything helpful, the only thing I see in the schematic is that you should probably put 250A MRBF fuses on the LFP battery terminals, then have a 400A (or suitable) class T fuse after the bus.
So, WESTERLY replaced her 696Ah FireFly bank and cruised 2024 with (2) Epoch 300Ah batteries in parallel. I was very happy with the improvement in capacity. But I did keep the start battery (AGM) for starter/winch loads, so we only have two banks. Rather than the DC/DC chargers to the AGM banks, I just went with a legacy AC charger running off the alternator/inverter.
After a year of combining B1 and B2 when charging in order to guard against load dumps, I have decided the alternator is sufficiently protected by having (2) BMS's and an alternator protection device (APD). Monitoring the bank all summer indicated that max temps were about 94F, and charging voltage was well under any level that might cause a cell over voltage shutdown (The alternator charges to about 13.8v and 92% SOC when cruising). Epoch recommends charging to 100% and the charge termination threshold once per month, which I do with the AC charger set at 14.4v when on shore power.
Also, I wired a remote Blue Seas switch to the pilothouse where I can connect B2 (AGM) power very quickly if needed. And the regulator has remote pilothouse switches that turn the Balmar 618 regulator on/off, and force to float. When cruising on consecutive days, the alternator only charges to float (13.5v). Most of the time, the LFP bank cycled between 30% and 80%.
I know there are 20M ways to do this, and there are a lot of opinionated DIY'ers (like me), but I think you can install an LFP battery bank that is very safe, and simple (meaning non-victron/mastervolt).
See ya this summer. Jay N