Ok, I'll toss my newbie $.02 in here.
FWIW, I kind of like the design of the cabin. The low, as you put it commercial/military design, from the
side, the design sort of reminds me of some of the old school yachts belonging to various stars, moguls and presidents that I've seen over the years. The old school look kind of appeals to me
I do agree that a pilot house or flybridge should be added. The low profile cabin doesn't appear to lend itself well to docking and close quarter maneuvering such a wide boat.
The wife and I were at one of the local Marinas a couple of days ago, and there was a 60?' cat in for maintenance. What an awesome sight
but very modern and "sterile".
Then we walked over and checked out a Ranger Tug, a GB and an older Trawler (sorry, I forgot to check the make while I was busy drooling}.
Now I love catamarans, but the looks of the older, more conventional trawler's still won my heart. I guess for me at least, it's the difference between the old and new. Maybe it's my age, or maybe it's a desire for a simpler time, but the looks of a conventional trawler keep winning me over.
That square cabin on your design adds just that sort of old school look.
IDK, maybe if you added a slight roundness to the forward area of the cabin in may be more appealing some?
Anyway, cool design. Way outside my budget, and boat design is above my pay grade, but all the best with the sales
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