David
Good article. My only comments are:
1. If you combine panel wiring then do it with a fuse block. That way, should you wish to isolate one panel it is easy to do so by removing its fuse.
2. You could add Victron to the list of good controllers.
For interest I have attached a graph showing my own system performance. I have 6 x 345W panels and 2 x FlexMax80 controllers, and 1284 Ah AGM house bank. And 2 x 200A alternators. The data were collected firstly on a winter/spring cruise to the Great Barrier Reef (GBR), and then in Brisbane (latitude 27.5°S) during summer. I have all comforts of home, and was typically using over 400Ah at anchor overnight. Plus more during the day. I can turn some stuff off to extend days at anchor if required, but usually don't need to worry about doing that. Reefer, icemaker, freezer are the biggest power hogs.
There are 4 panels on the hardtop, and 2 on the pilothouse roof. My avatar pic was taken a week after they were installed, and as shown in the pic I often lay the tall VHF antennae down to avoid shading. I still get some shading at certain boat orientations, and it has a huge impact on solar output.